I do really like the composition, but I think the photos don't do it justice, the colors seem a little "weak"...I've noticed this in all your photos, the tattoos are great, but the light is not the best one!
In that case, you're right! Anyway, I love the hannya, it's like it's old and broken, and real!! For the snake, I'm not a big fan of the "traditional" way of colouring scales, but other than that I like it! Keep up the good work, I love your style!